Saturday, 1 March 2014

The Bunyip by Finn

His knees trembled as he cast the creature over his shoulder as it may still be alive.  As he ran the colossal creature was right behind him. Shaking with fear he fell over,  his stomach went over and over violently.

If  he haven't have cheated, if he haven't have found it, if he haven't have cast it over his shoulder he wouldn't be in this position... He thought things were going to get worse...

THUD the creature jumped next to him"run" he bellowed, as the lightning struck,  it was like lighting a match in pitch black, the bunyip killed a few of his friends or did he...

Yes, yes, he did Kill most (not all) but  most of his friends so he was all alone... the lightning struck. It scared the man but it also disturbed the baby Bunyip what if he was  trapped? Captured? Murdered? He didn't know,  he was the most frightened, shocked, petrified man on earth. He ran, sprinted,  but he still could not get away from the bunyip...

Suddenly a deafening noise split the sky open, and released the lightning out of the black sky,
and then he turned into DUST!!!!

2 comments:

  1. good story hope you learning a lot about Australia

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  2. Wow that has really gripped me I love the use of elipses. Ella

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