Thursday, 10 April 2014

Vicky's 100 word challenge

couldn't wait; we were going to my auntie’s house - for the first time! It may sound boring but actually it’s not just any normal house, it’s a ancient castle! My Mum said the views were amazing and that the rooms were luxury...

However when we got there it wasn't exactly how I’d imagined it. The castle was a ruin and my aunties family lived in a small cottage covered in vines. Unfortunately we had to sleep in a ‘luxury’ room. I kept on asking myself the same question “Why was I so exited before”.This place was a dump!       

1 comment:

  1. Great! Bit more punctuation maybe? k :-)
    Laura & Phoebe

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