I couldn't wait; we were going to my auntie’s house - for the first time! It may sound boring but actually it’s not just any normal house, it’s a ancient castle! My
Mum said the views were amazing and that the rooms were luxury...
However when
we got there it wasn't exactly how I’d imagined it. The castle was a ruin and
my aunties family lived in a small cottage covered in vines. Unfortunately we
had to sleep in a ‘luxury’ room. I kept on asking myself the same question “Why
was I so exited before‽”.This place was a dump!
Great! Bit more punctuation maybe? k :-)
ReplyDeleteLaura & Phoebe