“Did you steal my chalk, boy in the corner? “ The teacher shouted across the classroom to the small boy in the corner who was crying.
A scream came from the cupboard then the candles blew out and the scream got louder and louder then it stopped, the teacher screamed and the students laughed.
“It’s Tuesday and you are all going home, now.” Said Mr Grumpypants, the class four teacher. “But Sir, we have just arrived and we are going on a school trip to the graveyard, and, and ….”
“I’m going home NOW for my sausages and mash potatoes that Mrs Grumpypants will have ready for me on the table, with my slippers and newspaper. You BOYS stay here and finish your writing, I will see you in the morning.” Mr Grumpypants laughed and slammed the door.
The fire blew down the door and the glass scattered across the floor. “Run, run now.” The teacher shouted to the students as they screamed.
I liked your story because you have used a huge variaty of punctuation.
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