Saturday 13 September 2014

Bartie Gets Blasted

Mr Bartelblaster was a rotten blighter. Cruel, wicked, terrifying and bloated! If you compared him with an inflated wrinkly toad, he would come off worse. Discipline was his byword, but in truth he delighted in pupil torture. His favoured punishment, forced imbibing of malt vinegar milkshake, thrust on any student stepping across his red line. The dreaded defined boundary that allowed any type of callous concoction to be suffered and endured by this bully. School rules and human rights disregarded ,this monstrosity would suffer his demise at the hand of Johnny Jugular. He is a pupil revered and commemorated by all who tread these hallowed halls.

by John Davies

1 comment:

  1. I really like this you have used a rang of vocab

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