Thursday 11 September 2014

Mr Richardson turned a deeper shade of red. Fire came out from his nostrils, steam came out of his ears, his eyes flashed like fire at Oliver. Oliver was not the best on timetables. Mr Richardson's voice was like a volcano erupting, he grasped his cane in his furry hands and pointed it at Oliver. Oliver was like a shivering wreck . Mr Richardson said 'What is 10x9=?' 'I d ..d.. d..d. 'replied Oliver. 'What did you say boy?'. Then Oliver got his black board and wrote 90 then owed Mr Richardson. Mr Richardson paused in his ranting and raving, all went quiet, 'so why did you not tell me first', he said exasperatedly. 100 word challenge

1 comment:

  1. Good story seems quite short but that's because you used a lot of detail. It's very short and snappy.maybe some better time connectives could be used than just then.

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