One bad dream
As I lay in my bed tossing and turning "Boxwell stand up and come to the front" the teacher shouted.
So Boxwell did as he was told."A, b, c, d, e, g, k". The teacher was furious. "Boxwell go to the dunce's corner and I will deal with you later". Then Boxwell started muttering under his breath. The teacher said "WHAT WAS THAT BOY you just said". Boxwell replied "Nothing Sir". "Boxwell hold out your hand".
At that point I awoke realising it was all a bad dream and could hear my mum shouting me "GET UP BREAKFAST'S READY".
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Well done Max - a really exciting and engaging 100WC
ReplyDeleteExcellent punctuation included and speech to bring characters to life!
Mr Warne
That was amazing as you used lots of description through out your writing.
ReplyDeleteHi, I am From malvern parish. I liked your writing, because it was descriptive and was set in the past :)
ReplyDeleteI really liked the puntuation.
Maybe nextime you could right a bit more about the appearence of the classroom and characters
From George